Episode 41 with Literary Agent Ann Collette: Women's Fiction Excerpt - Georges Island by Joan Yenawine
Literary Agent Ann Collette of the Rees Literary Agency joined us for another episode of Writer's Infusion!
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 7:40.
Click here to download the original pages from the women's fiction submission from Massachusetts titled "Georges Island."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the women's fiction submission from Massachusetts titled "Georges Island."
Episode 40 with Literary Agent Ann Collette: Young Adult Excerpt - Taboo by Joyce Doyle
Literary Agent Ann Collette of the Rees Literary Agency joined us live to film this episode at the Cambridge Public Library in Massachusetts. It was our most exciting episode-watch to find out why!
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 6:28.
Click here to download the original pages from the young adult excerpt submission from Maine titled "Taboo."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the young adult excerpt submission from Maine titled "Taboo."
Episode 39: Historical Fiction short story - A Dawn of Peace by Tom Heeren
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:26.
Click here to download the original pages from the historical fiction short story submission from Kansas titled "A Dawn of Peace."
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Episode 38: Literary Novel Excerpt - Retribution: A Cape Cod Love Story by Chris Piccone
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 9:53.
Click here to download the original pages from the literary novel excerpt submission from New Jersey titled "Retribution: A Cape Cod Love Story."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the literary novel excerpt submission from New Jersey titled "Retribution: A Cape Cod Love Story."
Episode 37: Fantasy Excerpt - The Sonorous Rainbow by Mandy Moore
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:54.
Click here to download the original pages from the romance excerpt submission from Texas titled "The Sonorous Rainbow."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the romance excerpt submission from Texas titled "The Sonorous Rainbow."
Episode 36: Historical Novel Excerpt from Massachusetts
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:43.
Episode 35: Literary Novel Excerpt from Alabama
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 7:10.
Click here to download the original pages from the literary novel excerpt submission from Alabama.
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Episode 34: Young Adult Excerpt - Licorice by Ria
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:20.
Episode 33: Romance Novel Excerpt - Jar of Hearts by Anna Kaling
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:36.
Click here to download the original pages from the romance excerpt submission from Maine titled "Jar of Hearts."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the romance excerpt submission from Maine titled "Jar of Hearts."
Episode 32: Novel Excerpt: A Soldier's Memorial by Jack Hitchner
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:50. Please stick around for the first couple of minutes, though, in which we hear more from Jack before he reads his story.
Episode 31: Novel Excerpt - Ratarra: The Legend of Damian Book 1: Rise of Offspring by Michael W. Schwartz
Episode 30: Novel Excerpt - Meet Your Guardian Angel by Ruth Weiner
Episode 29: Short Story - An Inanimate Proposal by Nicholas Gregory Schwab
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 5:23.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story submission from Ohio titled "An Inanimate Proposal."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story submission from Ohio titled "An Inanimate Proposal."
Episode 28: Memoir - Floating in Salt Water by Barbara Carter
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:20.
Click here to download the original pages from the memoir submission from Nova Scotia titled "Floating in Salt Water."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the memoir submission from Nova Scotia titled "Floating in Salt Water."
Episode 27: Dystopian YA Excerpt - Moving Walls by Robert Owens
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:57.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story submission from Maryland titled "Moving Walls."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story submission from Maryland titled "Moving Walls."
During the episode, Dave mentions a book he deems "great," despite "not one sentence being grammatically correct." The book is The Painter by Peter Heller. Check it out on Amazon and see what you think.
Episode 26: Novel Excerpt - Red Satin Ribbons by Donna B. Comeaux
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:52.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story submission from Oklahoma titled "Red Satin Ribbons."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story submission from Oklahoma titled "Red Satin Ribbons."
Episode 25: Short Story - The Divorce That Almost Was by Bertha Pruitt
Writer's Infusion Episode 25: The Divorce That Almost Was
Read MoreEpisode 24: Middle Grade Excerpt - Casey Buckles and the Keeper of the Ice Caves by Dani Camarena
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 11:00.
Note: This excerpt is from the middle of the story.
Click here to download the original pages from the Middle Grade submission from Idaho titled "Casey Buckles and the Keeper of the Ice Caves."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the Middle Grade submission from Idaho titled "Casey Buckles and the Keeper of the Ice Caves."
Episode 23: Memoir Excerpt - The Constancy of Entropy
If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 13:35.
Click here to download the original pages from the memoir submission from New Jersey titled "The Constancy of Entropy."
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the memoir submission from New Jersey titled "The Constancy of Entropy."