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Latest and Greatest:

Episodes
Episode 85: Afterglow by Christopher Roche
about a month ago
Episode 84: What Am I Rated? by Casey Hardt
about 2 months ago
Episode 83: The Eight Amulets by Girish Ramachandran
about 2 months ago
Episode 82: Rowenna by Erica Verrillo
about 2 months ago
Episode 81: Search for the Sunlight by Craig Thomson
about 4 months ago

Fresh Tweets:

  • Episode 85: Afterglow by Christopher Roche https://t.co/Cimk47rNtE
    about a month ago
  • Episode 84: What Am I Rated? by Casey Hardt https://t.co/J43InsLtEi
    about 2 months ago

Episode 31: Novel Excerpt - Ratarra: The Legend of Damian Book 1: Rise of Offspring by Michael W. Schwartz

December 25, 2015

Click here to download the original pages from the dystopian excerpt submission from New Hampshire titled "Ratarra: The Legend of Damian Book 1: Rise of Offspring."

Click here to download the critiqued pages from the dystopian excerpt submission from New Hampshire titled "Ratarra: The Legend of Damian Book 1: Rise of Offspring."

 

Read about Michael W. Schwartz on our Meet our Guests page (scroll down on the page to his bio).

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