Episode 32: Novel Excerpt: A Soldier's Memorial by Jack Hitchner

If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:50. Please stick around for the first couple of minutes, though, in which we hear more from Jack before he reads his story.

Click here to download the original pages from the novel excerpt submission from New Hampshire titled "A Soldier's Memorial."

Click here to download the critiqued pages from the novel excerpt submission from New Hampshire titled "A Soldier's Memorial."