Episode 66 with Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein: Panic on Madison Avenue by Francis DeStefano III

Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein of the GO Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of flash fiction.

 

Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein

Episode 65 with Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein: Schizo by Elfen Bridger

Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein of the GO Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a young adult excerpt.

 

Episode 64 with Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein: The Novelist by John Leggett

Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein of the GO Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a literary novel excerpt.

 

Episode 63 with Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein: Young Adult Excerpt by Globiana

Literary Agent Amaryah Orenstein of the GO Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a middle grade excerpt.

 

Episode 62: Middle Grade - My Life Looking Up by Lesley Niemy, with guest critiquer Author Jennifer S. Brown

 

Episode 61: Memoir - The Ups and Downs of Cycling by Erin Oldham, with guest critiquer Author Jennifer S. Brown

If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 9:55.

Click here to download the original pages from the memoir submission from Maine.

Click here to download the critiqued pages from the memoir submission from Maine.

 

Episode 60: Memoir - The Color Room by James Goedkoop, with guest critiquer Author Jennifer S. Brown

 

Episode 59: YA - Expectations by Mary Newton Lima

If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:50.

 

Episode 57 with guest critiquer, author Connie Mayo: The Reader by Sushrut Jangi

 

Episode 56 with guest critiquer, author Connie Mayo: Romance - Take this Photograph for me by William Bowden

 

Episode 55 with guest critiquer, author Connie Mayo: Women's Fiction - Hannah's Turtles by Karen Corsi

 

f you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:10. 

Click here to download the original pages from the short story from Massachusetts.
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story from Massachusetts.

Episode 54: Short Story (Historical Fiction) - The Killing by Robert Kahn


If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 9:55. 

Click here to download the original pages from the short story from Maine.
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story from Maine.

 

Episode 53: Literary Novella - Fireworks for Bastille Day by Kathleen Kirsch

 

If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 9:07. 

Click here to download the original pages from the literary novella from Maine.
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the literary novella from Maine.

Episode 52: YA Short Story - Turkeys Take Flight by Cathryn Bonica

 

Episode 51: Fantasy Novel - Project ASA by Lizabeth Gelassen

 

Episode 50: Literary Fiction - Helium 3 Fusion by Marilyn Delson

 

Episode 49: Women's Fiction - As Long as We're Together by Rebekah Fraser

 

Episode 48: Short Story Mystery - Alyson Holmes On the Job by Richard Santarelli

 

Episode 47: Women's Fiction - Rock Hero Finds Redemption by Brenda Marsian