This is the Writer's Infusion critique of Episode 55 - Hannah's Turtles by Karen Corsi. Go to www.writersinfusion.com to view the edited pages.
f you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:10.
Click here to download the original pages from the short story from Massachusetts.
Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story from Massachusetts.
