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Episode 85: Afterglow by Christopher Roche
about a month ago
Episode 84: What Am I Rated? by Casey Hardt
about 2 months ago
Episode 83: The Eight Amulets by Girish Ramachandran
about 2 months ago
Episode 82: Rowenna by Erica Verrillo
about 2 months ago
Episode 81: Search for the Sunlight by Craig Thomson
about 4 months ago

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    about 2 months ago

Episode 59: YA - Expectations by Mary Newton Lima

December 16, 2016

If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:50.

Click here to download the original pages from the young adult submission from Massachusetts.

Click here to download the critiqued pages from the young adult submission from Massachusetts.

 

Read about Mary Newton Lima on our Meet our Guest Authors page (scroll down on the page to her bio).

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