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Episode 81: Search for the Sunlight by Craig Thomson

about 2 days ago

Episode 80: YA Excerpt by Jennifer Sternick and Tom Wilinsky

about a month ago

Episode 79: Queen of Spades by Valley Shaia

about a month ago

Episode 78: Lost and Found Boys by Kimberly St. Lawrence

about a month ago

Episode 77: Where's Barnaby? by Wendy Sheehan

about 6 months ago

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Episode 81: Search for the Sunlight by Craig Thomson https://t.co/BlZJEvTIKu
about 2 days ago
Episode 80: YA Excerpt by Jennifer Sternick and Tom Wilinsky https://t.co/ZTLJuR49fu
about a month ago

Episode 11: Dystopian Excerpt by Leah Mercurio

January 29, 2015

Click here to download the original pages from Leah's submission of her dystopian novel.

Click here to download the critiqued pages from Leah's submission of her dystopian novel.