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Episode 77: Where's Barnaby? by Wendy Sheehan

about 3 months ago

Episode 76: Exploring the Universe by Carol Malthaner

about 4 months ago

Episode 75: Science Fiction Excerpt by Nate Stovall

about 4 months ago

Episode 74: Short Story - Broken Rules by Lynn Leonard

about 5 months ago

Episode 73 at Hollihock!: Fantasy Excerpt - The Rulkurkh by Anders Cahill

about 5 months ago

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about 4 months ago

Episode 11: Dystopian Excerpt by Leah Mercurio

January 29, 2015

Click here to download the original pages from Leah's submission of her dystopian novel.

Click here to download the critiqued pages from Leah's submission of her dystopian novel.