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About the Author:
Carol is a retired high school special education English teacher who now works part-time as an executive function coach. She has written most of her life, but she became serious about it twelve years ago after taking a Teachers As Writers course. She now writes almost every day in between coaching sessions, concocting vegetarian recipes, walking her dog, and caring for her horse. She is currently working on a novel set in Florida near where her family has spent time.