Episode 68: Short Story Mystery by Abhishek Indoria

If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:18.

Click here to download the original pages from the short story mystery submission from Arizona.

Click here to download the critiqued pages from the short story mystery submission from Arizona.

Read about Abhishek Indoria on our Meet our Guest Authors page (scroll down on the page to his bio).