This is the Writer's Infusion manuscript critique of Episode 45: Marshall's Child by Robine Andrau. Go to www.writersinfusion.com to view the edited pages.
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Click here to download the original pages from the women's fiction from Massachusetts titled "Marshall's Child."
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