Episode 61: Memoir - The Ups and Downs of Cycling by Erin Oldham, with guest critiquer Author Jennifer S. Brown

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Guest critiquer, Author Jennifer S. Brown

Episode 60: Memoir - The Color Room by James Goedkoop, with guest critiquer Author Jennifer S. Brown

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Guest critiquer, Author Jennifer S. Brown

Episode 59: YA - Expectations by Mary Newton Lima

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Episode 58: Thriller - Home is Where You Go by Nancy Webb

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Episode 57 with guest critiquer, author Connie Mayo: The Reader by Sushrut Jangi

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Connie Mayo

Episode 56 with guest critiquer, author Connie Mayo: Romance - Take this Photograph for me by William Bowden

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Connie Mayo

Episode 55 with guest critiquer, author Connie Mayo: Women's Fiction - Hannah's Turtles by Karen Corsi

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Connie Mayo

Episode 54: Short Story (Historical Fiction) - The Killing by Robert Kahn

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Episode 53: Literary Novella - Fireworks for Bastille Day by Kathleen Kirsch

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Episode 52: YA Short Story - Turkeys Take Flight by Cathryn Bonica

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Episode 51: Fantasy Novel - Project ASA by Lizabeth Gelassen

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Episode 50: Literary Fiction - Helium 3 Fusion by Marilyn Delson

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Episode 49: Women's Fiction - As Long as We're Together by Rebekah Fraser

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Episode 48: Short Story Mystery - Alyson Holmes On the Job by Richard Santarelli

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Episode 47: Women's Fiction - Rock Hero Finds Redemption by Brenda Marsian

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Episode 46: Literary Novel Excerpt by Maggie Ferguson

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Episode 45: Women's Fiction - Marshall's Child by Robine Andrau

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Episode 44: Memoir - Basement Cake by Martha Coats

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Episode 43 with Literary Agent Ann Collette: Middle Grade Excerpt by Joyce Gerber

Literary Agent Ann Collette of the Rees Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a middle grade excerpt.

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Ann Collette

Click here to download the original pages from the middle grade submission from Massachusetts.

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Episode 42 with Literary Agent Ann Collette: Thriller Excerpt by Dan Biles

Literary Agent Ann Collette of the Rees Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a thriller excerpt.

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Read about Dan Biles on our Meet our Guest Authors page (scroll down on the page to his bio).

Ann Collette