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Click here to download the original pages from the short story mystery excerpt from Massachusetts.
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Click here to download the original pages from the literary fiction excerpt from Connecticut.
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Click here to download the original pages from the literary fiction excerpt from Massachusetts.
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Read about Maggie Ferguson on our Meet our Guest Authors page (scroll down on the page to her bio).
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Click here to download the original pages from the women's fiction from Massachusetts titled "Marshall's Child."
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Click here to download the original pages from the memoir from Massachusetts titled "Basement Cake."
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Literary Agent Ann Collette of the Rees Literary Agency joined us at the Cambridge Library for a critique of a middle grade excerpt.
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Click here to download the original pages from the women's fiction submission from Massachusetts titled "Georges Island."
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Click here to download the original pages from the young adult excerpt submission from Maine titled "Taboo."
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Click here to download the original pages from the historical fiction short story submission from Kansas titled "A Dawn of Peace."
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Click here to download the original pages from the literary novel excerpt submission from New Jersey titled "Retribution: A Cape Cod Love Story."
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Click here to download the original pages from the romance excerpt submission from Texas titled "The Sonorous Rainbow."
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If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 8:43.
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Click here to download the original pages from the literary novel excerpt submission from Alabama.
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Click here to download the original pages from the romance excerpt submission from Maine titled "Jar of Hearts."
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If you want to skip ahead to the critique, read the pages on your own (links below) and go to minute 10:50. Please stick around for the first couple of minutes, though, in which we hear more from Jack before he reads his story.
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Click here to download the original pages from the short story submission from Ohio titled "An Inanimate Proposal."
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